This is a great story, and the full version in Karet's book is superb.
--SL
01/05 |
Okay, a serious comment: It reminds me of Miguel de Unamuno's novel that begins with the protagonist not knowing what to do with his day, or his life, so he sets out to follow a dog that is aimlessly wandering the streets... and so begins the tale. Yes I'm serious. And yes, I'm hoping he runs off with the beautiful cripple.
--RMS
03/09 |
I just wanted to clarify what I said earlier, because apparently my feedback was "psychotic" and I had trouble putting my ideas into sentences. I left my brief comment because I wanted to save other people the trouble of reading a massively bad piece of writing. I had already wasted 30 minutes of my life reading it, and I wasn't going to waste even more time dissecting what made it so awful. I'll leave that to someone else. I'm sorry if you didn't find my comments helpful, but you didn't bother addressing the narrative either.
--NM
03/08 |
the feedback here is psychotic; what's the deal with Hooksexup readers? come on - have some patience. read, and then try to put a few words together, preferably into a sentence, and say something real about what what you've read.
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03/07 |
Why, oh why did I read this? The title alone should have been enough to scare me off.
--NM
03/07 |
I'm interested in finding out what's with him and his wife.
--DAP
03/07 |
I really relate to the main character.
--DAP
03/07 |
Oh god, that was such a good story.
--DAP
03/07 |
This is one piece of seriously, seriously bad writing.
--JLA
03/07 |
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