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Houston neighbors pull back the curtains and expose each other’s lives.
Scanner
Your daily cup of WTF?
Date Machine
Putting your baggage to good use.
The Modern Materialist
Almost everything you want.
Autumn Sonnichsen
A fashionable L.A. photo editor exploring all manner of hyper-sexual girls down south.
ScreenGrab
The Hooksexup Film Blog
Chase
The creator of Supercult.com poses his pretty posse.
The Remote Island
Hooksexup's TV blog.
61 Frames Per Second
Smarter gaming.
ScreenGrab
The Hooksexup Film Blog
Slice
Each month a new artist; each image a new angle. This month: Giovanni Cervantes.
Paper Airplane Crush
A San Francisco photographer on the eternal search for the girls of summer.
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Reader Feedback on "Key West"
I liked it. Very swift entry, a concise premise fit for a short piece. It left me wondering about the character's world.
--KH
02/20 |
This story reminds me of coming back from the beach after a day sunning and swimming with a woman I had met several weeks before. While making out and caressing each other before showering, she ordered me to shower alone with very exotic liquid soap. She then pressed against the glass door with her perky firm natural breasts as she playfully poured cold water on my head from above. I stepped out, very erect and she pulled on me as she showered alone. I dried off and fetched two stiff drinks and watched her step into high heeled sandals, which accented her beautiful ass and legs. I slowly put on a ribbed condom and as she bent over the counter, she looked back, smiling as I playfully slapped each cheek. I entered her very slowly before she pushed back, allowing me to look down as she pulled her cheeks apart, which led to the hottest quickie sex I had had in years!!! She told me that her girlfriends would love to have their firm ass cheeks spanked as foreplay by hubbies or boyfriends. Such naughtiness leading to very hot intercourse!!!
--DLG
02/10 |
Bleagh. Poorly written erotica can still be hot. Not this time. It doesn't take an "mfa" to know the beginning and end of this story needs to be cut, and the middle needs to be less terrible. "asl, what are you wearing" gets me more aroused than this.
--ES
01/26 |
Dear AB, Just like an MFAer to get persnickety about punctuation, dude. Come on, admit it, you're a self-loathing Master of the Fine Arts, defensive about this lazily woven yarn because you mistook the hard-on it gave you for edgy material.
--DB
01/25 |
Dear ps -- If there're too many "asses" and "cunts" and "thongs" for your taste, perhaps you've confused Hooksexup Fiction for your MFA workshop or something. Use some capitals, dude.
--AB
01/25 |
too many "asses" and "cunts" and "thongs." it's like the narrator can't describe herself sipping a cup of coffee without reminding us, once again, of her ass stuck to her bikini bottoms. too much bravado or something. i suspect this writer, however, is profoundly talented and just sort of banged this one out . . . of her ass! very much looking forward to reading more of her serious work.
--ps
01/24 |
just what i needed on a freezing january day.
--bm
01/24 |
Damn that was hot woman!
--DJN
01/24 |
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